"An experimental autobiographical novel singularly immersed in its author’s psyche, in which all elegance is abandoned, tedious experiences are embraced, and the act of shitting is evoked, at one point, as “AAAAAAGGGHHH!!"

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An experimental novel immersed in its author's psyche, in which elegance is abandoned and the act of shitting is evoked, at one point, as “AAAAAAGGGHHH!!"

I don't want to sit down and have to parse through a book review, I just want to read it.