Re:news.YC, Thanks for your website feedback! Mostly impleme...
by Goladus on Thursday April 26, 2007 @02:33PM
(#17114)
For starters, eliminate "Swiss Army Knife." It's a bit too general and therefore distracting.
Also eliminate the part about giving more power to consumers. When I visit your website, I'm not thinking of myself as "consumers." I'm just a guy who wants to get something done and wondering if maybe you can help.
Take the rest of that sentence and separate it into one sentence for each idea.
Re:news.YC, Thanks for your website feedback! Mostly impleme...
by juwo on Thursday April 26, 2007 @02:37PM
(#17117)
I appreciate your help.
What I am struggling with is, I am doing all the stuff - but people (at least on YC) dont get it:
1) links to 3 screenshots
2) simple cartoon diagrams with an analogy to shopping lists
3) a list of "what is in it for me" i.e. how juwo can help you.
4) links to demos for each of the above in 3).
Isnt all this good enough?
Re:news.YC, Thanks for your website feedback! Mostly impleme...
by juwo on Thursday April 26, 2007 @03:27PM
(#17139)
ok, I am going to do something different. please stay tuned.
Re:news.YC, Thanks for your website feedback! Mostly impleme...
by juwo on Thursday April 26, 2007 @09:19PM
(#17255)
ok, please go to http://juwo.com again. Is that better?
The para you asked is taken from juwo.com:
A "Swiss Army knife" piece of software that gives more power to consumers to structure snippets of audio, video and text as a bullet list, to more easily index and annotate them, and to share the lists with others. Its benefits extend to multimedia as related to more enriching broadcasts, collaboration and organizing.