It's definitely satisfying a need. I think your site could really do with some social proof but if you don't have any yet it's OK.

I find the header, "More Kirk, less Spock", slightly off putting as a first attempt at selling to me. I don't watch star trek and have no idea what that means. I suppose your mileage may vary on that one depending on if the visitor knows the show but you are making a big assumption there.

Maybe try posting it on https://www.indiehackers.com as well, people are always asking for help improving their landing pages there.