It's definitely satisfying a need. I think your site could really do with some social proof but if you don't have any yet it's OK.

I find the header, "More Kirk, less Spock", slightly off putting as a first attempt at selling to me. I don't watch star trek and have no idea what that means. I suppose your mileage may vary on that one depending on if the visitor knows the show but you are making a big assumption there.

Maybe try posting it on https://www.indiehackers.com as well, people are always asking for help improving their landing pages there.

MVP, free course, helps you create messaging and sales copy for your website. Human element is almost always lacking in early consumer focused pitches/websites from tech co's. Would love some feedback. Worth polishing? Do the lessons make sense? What's missing?