Re:Ask HN: Please critique my landing page
by spooneybarger on Saturday July 24, 2010 @06:42PM
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You are asking people to turn over personal info based on 1 vague line about discounts up to 80%. I think you need to provide a good bit more info- why does this free membership save me money? are they going to send me ads? etc etc etc.
Re:Ask HN: Please critique my landing page
by cherif on Saturday July 24, 2010 @06:55PM
(#1544566)
Good points, thanks. Will include link to privacy policy and elaborate more in description. Was trying to cut down the copy to a minimum but I guess I went too far.