As (probably) Pascal said: "If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter".
"I am working at being more concise."
Maybe, "I am working on brevity."
Related, I am working on this as I've been asked to write a book.
If this topic interests you I recommend this book on crafting sentences written by the mother of the famous "Edward Tufte" (one of the most influential designers in the history of software):
https://www.amazon.com/Artful-Sentences-Syntax-as-Style/dp/0...
I've read a number of writing books and I find the key to good writing comes down to writing good sentences. It's also a critical part of being succint, only second to trimming the non-essential from the higher level ideas.
This one highlights many great sentences written by famous authors and breaks down their syntax.
> Despite mathematics being a universal language, culture clash could be getting in the way, says Kim. “In Japan people are pretty used to long, technical discussions by the lecturer that require a lot of concentration,” he says. “In America or England we expect much more interaction, pointed questions coming from the audience, at least some level of heated debate.”
> There is a growing consensus that Mochizuki has over-engineered his work, contributing to the confusion. “Most of the large theories that he builds are not essential. He could have written things in a much more streamlined way,” says Voloch.
This is a problem in a lot of technical fields but also in writing in general. It's always easier to write 1000 words to say something than 100 to say it well.