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Re:Tackling Technical Writing by criddell on Thursday August 24, 2017 @12:10PM (#15091300)
Point taken. Your edit is much better.

Thanks.

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Re:Tackling Technical Writing by abecedarius on Thursday August 24, 2017 @03:38PM (#15093317)
I guess it's worth mentioning that the original was also in the active voice. I agree the edit improved it; it's just not a change of voice.
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