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Re:Tackling Technical Writing by gglitch on Thursday August 24, 2017 @11:43AM (#15091026)
Active voice presents less conceptual noise. OP could have written, "A coworker advised me to avoid the passive voice," which not only uses fewer words (which is not inherently a virtue, in my opinion), but also requires less conceptual modeling to understand.
Re:Tackling Technical Writing by criddell on Thursday August 24, 2017 @12:10PM (#15091300)
Point taken. Your edit is much better.

Thanks.

Re:Tackling Technical Writing by abecedarius on Thursday August 24, 2017 @03:38PM (#15093317)
I guess it's worth mentioning that the original was also in the active voice. I agree the edit improved it; it's just not a change of voice.