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Re:Jefferies gives IBM Watson a Wall Street reality check by rdiddly on Friday July 14, 2017 @02:03AM (#14767865)
Mostly good advice, except "Change needs feedback." No human talks like that. Change, as the subject of the sentence, "needs feedback?" What will happen when we take the feedback and give it to the change? What will the change do with the feedback? And what does the change need the feedback for?

Not all brevity is the soul of wit.

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Re:Jefferies gives IBM Watson a Wall Street reality check by asveikau on Friday July 14, 2017 @10:31AM (#14770056)
I do agree that something was lost.

How about "for change to happen, we need your feedback"? I think that conveys the message and request accurately and succinctly.

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