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Re:The Art of Writing One-Sentence Product Descriptions by pilsetnieks on Tuesday April 18, 2017 @08:34PM (#14144430)
Because "this is X for Y" is technically one sentence but it needs a lot of work to decode. If you can deliver just a sentence, it should also be just a sentence of thought to parse. Instead we need to think about what is X, what is Y, substitute the variables, and now we're juggling a paragraph of incoherent thought. Whereas a "Do this, and that happens" doesn't need any of that.

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