Re:Ask HN: Investor Animated Video – draft critiques wanted
by craigm26 on Thursday April 21, 2016 @12:13PM
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So in your formatted suggestion:
"Do you want the ability to switch between voice chat, messaging, map directions, and calendars seamlessly with just using your voice while travelling?
Do you need that ability to enhance your awareness while travelling?
With Cavalcade, you can! Just download the app and form a cavalcade with your friends with just your phone number"
----That works a lot. I'll try that one. Thanks!
Do you want ....? Do you need ....?
Then say with XYZ you can .... , just [Call to Action]
Put that in front of people if people don't bite on it they don't care...find something they do.