Walt Whitman's Letter for a Dying Soldier to His Wife Discovered

Re:Walt Whitman's Letter for a Dying Soldier to His Wife Dis... by AI_Overlord on Thursday March 17, 2016 @12:29AM (#11302575)

For some reason it causes me a bit of difficulty to understand the headline on first pass. Something seems to be off with the gramar. Why not just say "Walt Whitman's letter to wife of dying soldier" Easier to understand in my opinion.

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Re:Walt Whitman's Letter for a Dying Soldier to His Wife Dis... by Polyphonie on Thursday March 17, 2016 @03:33AM (#11303006)

Re-read the headline:

> Walt Whitman's Letter For A Dying Soldier To His Wife Discovered

Just make sure you separate the middle part- Letter For A Dying Soldier To His Wife- from the rest.

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Re:Walt Whitman's Letter for a Dying Soldier to His Wife Dis... by gpvos on Thursday March 17, 2016 @06:09AM (#11303483)

That is actually the part with the problem. One problem for me is that when initially scanning the sentence, "for" implies that the letter is intended to be sent to the soldier; "on behalf of" would be clearer. Another minor unclarity is that "his" can refer to either the soldier or Walt Whitman.

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