Re:Write like you talk
by rquantz on Monday October 26, 2015 @08:35AM
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You're misunderstanding "if possible" here. It means "if it can be done while conveying all that you need to convey, and saying all that you mean." "Cut" doesn't do that.
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Re:Write like you talk
by cableshaft on Monday October 26, 2015 @12:20PM
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How about "Cut words out, when possible."?