Re:Paul Tudor Jones to Staff: Learn to Write or I'll Rip Up ...
by sokoloff on Friday October 23, 2015 @03:04PM
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Yes, lead with the point. I can't tell you how many emails I get that are written like a movie or TV script. (Better not spoil it for the reader; we'll just barely foreshadow the point and there's more coming up after this commercial break...)
Even worse is wading through one of these tomes, only to read two or three possible courses of action with none recommended above the other(s).
Even worse is wading through one of these tomes, only to read two or three possible courses of action with none recommended above the other(s).