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Those are great examples. I understand what you mean a bit better. And don't worry, I won't change my entire writing style based one person's opinion, but I can improve it where it makes sense for me. The reason I write this way is from my personal belief that most people don't read paragraphs (myself included) and so I sprinkle in short lines to break the flow (because those are the ones I would read first).

Strange. It's how I write. I'm not on Linkedin much nor on TikTok, would you mind telling me more about what you find grating about my writing style? Maybe I need to change something. (Chris)

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I don't think there will be backlash, hard to argue with the fact that most women simply are interested in other fields, which is a good thing.