My pitch just got massacred on This Week in Startups. Very embarrassing. AMA
So very embarrassing...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ky4ikcCoL0#t=18m10sKey takeaways for me:(1) Describe the product in the first sentence.(2) Less narrative more use cases.(3) Talk more about the people I'm pitching to and less about myself.Any more feedback? Jason and Tyler were pretty comprehensive but I really wish I had more time to discuss their points, some of them I agree with but...