Parent wasn't complaining about whether on/off topic, they were being critical of the writing style which sadly suffocates the reader. I may not agree with all their complaints, but the article is somewhat over elaborate in its exposition. I found myself skipping over tens of words and sentences to find out what actually happened to this unfortunate soul.
Re:The Death of Patient Zero
by fightlikeacow on Wednesday July 29, 2015 @03:44AM
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Agreed, the writing was so badly structured, I couldn't follow the narrative and skipped whole paragraphs
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