Telegram bot that will get answers from real doctors

Re:Telegram bot that will get answers from real doctors by jawns on Thursday July 23, 2015 @11:50AM (#9936504)

I suggest you hire a native English speaker to write and edit the copy on your site. There are numerous grammatical issues that instantly reduce your credibility. Just to name a couple:

"Find best Online Doctors to get instant medical advice and second opinion for your health problems." <-- Reads like spambot copy

"Talk with a Doctor on Phone." <-- Try "Phone a Doctor" or "Talk with a Doctor on the Phone."

"Subscribe a plan & Get Unlimited Medical Advice." <-- This is how my technophobe mother would text-message "Subscribe to a plan and get unlimited medical advice."

"Helping over 1000's of users everyday" <-- "over 1000's"? Does that mean several thousands? Or just more than 1,000?

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Re:Telegram bot that will get answers from real doctors by dhruvsuyam on Friday July 24, 2015 @02:14AM (#9940351)

Thank you very much. :) It looks like you have gone through our site in detail. We appreciate your feedback. Coming from a person like you who has written two books, we understand how lucid a content has to be.

We shall hire a content specialist. Can you suggest anyone?

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