Re:Who wrote this mysterious book satirizing tech startup cu...
by robinsloan on Wednesday June 10, 2015 @01:39PM
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Agree; this is just better/funnier prose.
The author is indeed probably "non-technical" but the specificity of the 1999-2000 Web 1.0 references indicates he/she has been steeped in this culture for a long time. I suppose you could just google "Pixelon" but... nah.
The first starts off as a perfectly normal sentence: "he shouted commands" and then ends with a funny surprise: "in Unix!" The second doesn't quite have the same punch. So if you want to favor the writing instead of the tech, even if you're a technical person, you might word it like the author did.