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Re:Show HN: Review my startup – a blogging platform by rellimevad on Thursday May 14, 2015 @05:13PM (#9547601)
"You shall not loose your work" should be "lose" on your pledge page.
Re:Show HN: Review my startup – a blogging platform by declnz on Friday May 15, 2015 @07:37AM (#9549951)
Whilst we're on corrections / copy suggestions...

"It let's your viewers find" should be "It lets", on the Why page.

Note that in that section, out of the four sentences, three end in an exclamation mark. IMO this does make the copy feel a bit... shouty / cheap; I don't imagine the Apple site, for example, would ever do this).

I'd also start that section again with the name (i.e. "Sunsed lets your viewers", rather than a pronoun (it). Readers often skip sections, plus excessive use of "it" is perhaps a bit de-personalising of the product.

Re:Show HN: Review my startup – a blogging platform by ne01 on Friday May 15, 2015 @02:14PM (#9552523)
Priceless... Thank you.
Re:Show HN: Review my startup – a blogging platform by ne01 on Thursday May 14, 2015 @05:46PM (#9547772)
Fixed it. English is my second language. Thanks!!!