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Re:Ask HN:Review my science fiction story. by srogers on Monday November 16, 2009 @02:11PM (#945045)
As far as technical details in fiction are concerned, I think they can enhance a story when they are described in a way that lets non-technical users image a system that at least has roughly the right inputs and outputs. I find that Charles Stross does this very well, particularly in Accelerando, Atrocity Archives, and Jennifer Morgue.

From Atrocity Archives: "he'll have to enlist GCHQ and a scanning tunneling microscope to find it under all the 0xDEADBEEF spammed across the hard disk platters."

Even without fully knowing about these concepts, you still get a rich picture of of a hard-drive wipe (hopefully the reader is savvy enough not to imagine anything too bovine).

What this pretty much boils down to is the popular fiction writing mantra "show, don't tell".

Re:Ask HN:Review my science fiction story. by roundsquare on Wednesday November 18, 2009 @12:38AM (#947837)
Yeah, your right. I guess I shouldn't say "remove technical details" but rather "use enough regular sounding English so that most people will get it."