Re:Ask HN:Review my science fiction story.
by roundsquare on Wednesday November 18, 2009 @12:38AM
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Yeah, your right. I guess I shouldn't say "remove technical details" but rather "use enough regular sounding English so that most people will get it."
From Atrocity Archives: "he'll have to enlist GCHQ and a scanning tunneling microscope to find it under all the 0xDEADBEEF spammed across the hard disk platters."
Even without fully knowing about these concepts, you still get a rich picture of of a hard-drive wipe (hopefully the reader is savvy enough not to imagine anything too bovine).
What this pretty much boils down to is the popular fiction writing mantra "show, don't tell".