The constants I've mentioned (23 bits of input and 8388608.0f) aren't "magic" but are the essence of floats when generating the uniform distribution for floats in the range 0..1.
That's what I want you to actually try in your code: to write it with the inputs of 24 bit integers 0..16777215 and to demonstrate that when you produce the float values and multiply these with the 16777216.0f you get every number from the 0..16777215.0f exactly once. Unless you show me that result (repeatable by anybody) I'll claim that your code doesn't work what it claims to have had achieved.
So once again, to be really clear: don't input any "random" bits. Input the integer numbers 0..16777215 (always only the lower 24 bits of them!) and demonstrate that your code works for floats (as explained above, every resulting float multiplied by the 16777216.0f must then be in the set of 0..16777215.0f and happen only once!). Only then I can believe you the equivalent solution works for doubles too. Before that, I don't believe you really understand what you want to do and what you're actually producing.
With my method we'd pick the magical constant 16777216.0f and we'd also get 0, 1, 2, ... 16777216.0f is bigger than 8388608f, therefore it's better.
This [1,2)-1.0 method has 0 probability of picking the first number less than 1.0, 2^-52 probability to pick the next one, 0 probability to pick the next one, 2^-52 probability of picking the next one, etc. My algorithm has 2^-53 probability of picking the first number less than 1.0, 2^-53 probability of picking the next one, etc. Down to .5 I can pick every representable number. After that there is a choice. I chose to have the same probability of picking every smaller number (including 0.0) as the probability of picking numbers in the upper half of the range, so I have holes that I can't pick, but at least in the upper half of the range I can pick every number I can represent.
That's why I think that [1,2)-1.0 is flawed. Because it adds an arbitrary limitation to its output, without any good reasons except that it was convenient to implement and they didn't have to think hard.