Re:Ask HN: Does my homepage make sense to you?
by landland on Thursday November 27, 2014 @12:21PM
(#8668113)
thanks for taking the time to write all of this, I really appreciate it. So it looks like I have a lot of work to do, mostly clean up the design colors and fix the copy, formatting. There was actually a lot more text in previous iterations believe it or not! I'll work on it. Thanks again for the candid feedback.
- Odd color and layout choices:
-- Why is "Enterprise" in scary black?
-- Why are some things vaguely centered (but not), other items right-aligned, and then back to left-aligned?
-- From the top, we go through blue, light-gray, orange, grayish-blue, black, yellow, dark-gray, blue, etc. colors.
- Bottom menu links don't work.
- "It's as easy (and awesome as pie)" should probably read "It's as easy (and awesome) as pie"
- "Hoot doesn't?" ... just... no.
- Lots and lots and lots of little things like missing decimal commas ("2000 profile matches" should be "2,000 profile matches", etc.)
- Resizing the browser window makes the hero image appear/disappear (Firefox 33, OSX 10.9.5, latest rMBP)
- The website is missing a useful title tag (currently: "Audience Owl -/")
- And again: Shorten ALL texts! Example for the top call-to-action: "Next Level E-mail Marketing. [new line] Deep insights into your e-mail recipients"