2- It's good to talk about more specifics, because when you over-generalize your product, specially something related to health, it will sound sketchy!
3- Give an example, to at least get initial interest of those people who have that specific eye-sight issue can resolve it.
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2- It's good to talk about more specifics, because when you over-generalize your product, specially something related to health, it will sound sketchy!
3- Give an example, to at least get initial interest of those people who have that specific eye-sight issue can resolve it.