I'd first like to say that this is the deck from a presentation at Velocity NY last week. Like most other talks, separating the slides from the presenter can make interpreting the context difficult. I did try to make an effort to have my slides provide useful information without me presenting them, but I acknowledge that I may not have done enough in that regard. I also received feedback from people present that there were too many bullet points and my font was too small. Can't please everyone I guess. But if you have a link to what you consider the "perfect" slide deck where unambiguous context is maintained without video of the talk, I'd love to study it in order to improve.

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