Re:Middle-School Dropout Codes Chat Program That Foils NSA S...
by cmsmith on Wednesday September 17, 2014 @08:35PM
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[learn about this] Middle School Dropout [and how he] codes [a] chat program that foils [the ability of the] NSA [to] spy [on communication]
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Re:Middle-School Dropout Codes Chat Program That Foils NSA S...
by aric on Wednesday September 17, 2014 @10:35PM
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Is English your first language? I'm not asking out of disrespect. I'm genuinely curious. The grammar of headlines and titling is often confusing to several non-native speakers. Incomplete sentences and 'news speak' play a vital role in language. For starters, it isn't a mouthful.
http://esl.about.com/od/intermediatereading/a/newsheadlines....
If you want a complete sentence that's more aligned with the meaning and intent of the original headline, try the following. "[A|This] Middle-School Dropout [Codes|Coded|Is Coding] [A] Chat Program That Foils NSA Spying." The one you wrote has some subtle, imperative differences in meaning. Adding "[the ability of the]" is hypercorrective. And it's verbose. "NSA Spying" is appositive speech; it's perfectly normal and understood.