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Re:Show HN: InstaMotor – Taking the pain out of selling your... by darkmighty on Friday April 04, 2014 @07:05PM (#7535025)
Some suggestions: replace "Earn" by "Save" or "Earn __ additional"; replace "~ 80% less" (sounds sloppy) with "up to" or even "about"/"usually"
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