Awesome, thank you for taking the time to write that, Nikita! All things going on to-do list.
About the "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" title... I'd love to simplify that to just "Funnel Analysis." Would that lose too much meaning?
You welcome! I think "Funnel Analysis" is better. Tracking is kinda implied in the whole conversion / funnel optimization thing, and presumably the value is in analysis & optimization, not tracking per se, so that's what should be in the title.
* You can safely drop "I'm a conversion optimization consultant." The sentence that follows is more powerful and easier to understand.
* "How I can help." – titles should not end in periods. This one as well as "Happy clients." can optionally end with a colon. There are a couple places in the text where punctuation is also incorrect, you should re-check it against English rules.
* "Conversion Optimization" should be to the left of "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" because it's simpler, IMHO.
* The bullets under "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" don't really say much about how it brings money, just what it is.
* On Chrome in OS X with standard settings, "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" is split into two lines. Layout looks a bit broken because of that.
* "How can I help?" assumes that the client knows the answer to that question. Don't intimidate them, either drop or rephrase this.
* Why no email? You can add it using javascript, and the vast majority of spam bots won't see it (google how to do that properly).