Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by lennydizzy on Sunday January 26, 2014 @05:21AM
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Can you please give some examples?
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Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by ronilan on Sunday January 26, 2014 @06:08AM
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Not in the article but still a good example:
> There are an alarming amount of typos and grammatical errors ...
Errors are countable. Should be:
There is an alarming number of typos and grammatical errors ...
Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by raverbashing on Sunday January 26, 2014 @08:10AM
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Countable elements should use are instead of is
There are many cars. There is much pain.
Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by ronilan on Sunday January 26, 2014 @08:26AM
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The number is singular.
There are many errors. There is an alarming number of them. There is too much debate. But not enough tipos.
Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by raverbashing on Sunday January 26, 2014 @08:30AM
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Your right ;) http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/number (item 5)
Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by seanmcdirmid on Sunday January 26, 2014 @07:21AM
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I would call that borderline, the original phrase was still clear and wasn't hard to read. Also, as verbal empire English, it's fine.
Living in china, I'm asked to correct a lot of grammars.
Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by tinco on Sunday January 26, 2014 @11:26AM
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What's your favourite grammar to correct?
Re:Failed to delight. Post-mortem of Delight IO
by erichocean on Sunday January 26, 2014 @12:48PM
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Nice.