I hate to be that guy, but a few things about your writing style throw me off. http://cl.ly/image/3U2k0s2p0b28 is not okay.

But, more importantly, who are you to review a private beta? This stuff isn't released yet.

1. Whats wrong with the style - its short and simple. similar to www.medium.com

2. Everyone has been reviewing the beta - apparently you don't know anything bout design lol.. wake up and see the world.