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Re:On writing well by niv on Thursday February 19, 2009 @11:40AM (#487461)
I'm not sure I agree. Okay, English is not my primary language, but it largely applies to Spanish. The so called "clutter" sometimes adds expresiveness. He argues that "smile happily" is redundant. But not all smiles are happy smiles. So the word is not dispensable at all.
Re:On writing well by mannicken on Thursday February 19, 2009 @04:30PM (#487890)
Compare:

Joe smiled happily.

Joe expressed his emotions of strong happiness through a certain smile.

Re:On writing well by sketerpot on Thursday February 19, 2009 @05:36PM (#487981)
If it adds expressiveness, then by definition it's not clutter.