Ask HN: Please, I need some feedback/suggestion on my launch page

Posted by needleme on Friday November 09, 2012 @10:57PM
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Hello,

I'm planning to officially release the launch page for my startup next week.

I'd really like to receive some general feedback about the contents, and since I'm from Italy - my english is not perfect I guess - also about the copywriting and the very short disclaimer for the "instagrammers".

I've browsed through Iubenda service but looks like I can't find any policies about the use/collect of Instagram username and pics - I know that the pics in Instagram are property of the photographer -

Here's the page

http://www.needle.me/

I'm thinking about to ask subscribers their @twitter too, but I don't wanna looks too intrusive.

Best, Filippo

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Re:Ask HN: Please, I need some feedback/suggestion on my lau... by anigbrowl on Friday November 09, 2012 @11:05PM (#4765877)

Don't worry, we hate spam too. And is not classy to sell emails. We are classy.

And it is not classy to sell...

Instagram agreement looks fine to me. Twitter, Facebook etc. are not intrusive as long as they are clearly optional. Lots of luck!

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Re:Ask HN: Please, I need some feedback/suggestion on my lau... by needleme on Saturday November 10, 2012 @09:06AM (#4766661)

Thanks!

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Re:Ask HN: Please, I need some feedback/suggestion on my lau... by damienbrz on Saturday November 10, 2012 @12:45AM (#4766044)

Here an idea for your launch page:

http://www.startuppuns.com/instagram/vinyl%20enthusiasts

You can change the word in the URL to exactly match your startup pitch.

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Re:Ask HN: Please, I need some feedback/suggestion on my lau... by needleme on Saturday November 10, 2012 @05:45AM (#4766428)

Hello damien,

scuse me, I guess I don't get what you'r suggesting me.

The claim? "we're the Instagram for vinyl enthusiast" is very cool and actually pretty real.

Or you're suggesting me to take the idea of the webpage? very simple, two sentences, mail container and stop

or both?

I mean, is everything perfect in the link you sent me, but I don't get how should use it

p.s. is saturday morning here, I'm almost dead when I saw your link

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Re:Ask HN: Please, I need some feedback/suggestion on my lau... by needleme on Saturday November 10, 2012 @09:05AM (#4766659)

ok, I get it how I can use this I guess, thanks!

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