"Consciousness is what I become when I differentiate a differentiation." - what IS "differentiation"? Differentiation from calculus? If so, this sentence is gibberish because computing higher-order derivatives is routinely done by automatic differentiation software (JAX in Python, ForwardDiff, Mooncake, Zygote and many more in Julia), but this software isn't conscious.

"The tension between differentiations is held, forming a space for self-transparent action." makes zero sense. What's "tension between differentiations"? What's "a space for self-transparent action"? More importantly, what is NOT "a space for self-transparent action"?

"It pulsates as the differentiation that differentiates, in the moment of enlivening itself as the differentiator." is similar: it's pompous yet meaningless. What's "the differentiator"? Something that can distinguish two things from each other? If so, logistic regression is a differentiator (classifier). It performs "acts of differentiation" (classification of observations), plus "the subject (the logistic regression) is not separate from the act of differentiating" because its parameters are used in the process. By the first sentence of "2. A New Formulation of Consciousness", logistic regression experiences consciousness, which is nonsense.