I appreciate the feedback.
Sorry to pick apart your sentences, I wrote as if I was picking apart something computer generated, without a human in the loop.
Haha, no worries! You were right to call it out.
> ‘My next piece’? Maybe for a part of a book or a long article, but for a blog post?
This is common phrasing, even for blogs.
None of the other phrasing is out of place, either.
I think you're mistaking different phrasing preferences for LLM use.
> When I publish my next piece I will personally write you an email, with some of my thoughts on the post.
‘My next piece’? Maybe for a part of a book or a long article, but for a blog post?
The next oddity, ignoring ‘personally’, which is inappropriate for a mailing list, is ‘…with some of my thoughts on the post’; you’re going to send me a piece with some of your thoughts on the post?
I’d expect more accurate phrasing from a med student.
Edit: tone down the criticism, I wrote without much thought that some one made the site; my apologies if I came off as overly critical.