do you really even need the lawyer friend? The email might bounce but they won't see the bounce only you will. Think of a better name than JohnSmith of course, and you need to use a real lawyer domain so if they goto www.whatipicked.com its real. But does this get you into more trouble with that actual firm? You say the cc isn't needed but I feel like it really puts your letter in another category all together. The category of "oh boy, he got a lawyer, just give up."