Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowing (No Visuals/Sound)

Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by invalidlogin on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @08:50AM (#41720040)

OP:

1. Use “you’re“, not “your”, for “you are”. It is wrong in the first “screen” image in your App Store listing.

2. Use an ellipsis — three dots, “…”, never two dots. This is in two images in your listing.

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by appsDev on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @09:14AM (#41720265)

Thanks for the tip! I will fix that (I have the bad habit of using 2 dots all the time) and the "your" part will definitely take care of. Thank you!!

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by nuancebydefault on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @09:33AM (#41720475)

Also there seems to be a missing negation in the accessibility paragraph.

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by appsDev on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @05:06PM (#41724977)

Will look into it - and the overall grammar as a whole. Thanks!

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by password4321 on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @09:19AM (#41720328)

Ellipsis also has its own dedicated Unicode code point if you want to get fancy, (U+2026): …

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by appsDev on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @01:42PM (#41723126)

Will check it out, thx!

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by 867-5309 on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @12:59PM (#41722695)

agree with 1. but for 2., any value more than one conveys the same meaning..

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Re:Show HN: I made a game you can play without anyone knowin... by appsDev on Wednesday October 02, 2024 @01:42PM (#41723135)

Ya thats why I typically am used to using 2, but I think the correct amount is 3 :)

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