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Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by colechristensen on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @12:47PM (#41710900)
The Washington Post headline:

>'The Eagle Has Landed' – Two Men Walk on the Moon

That is the entire story, in the headline as it should be. I want to know more! The first sentence should add the most relevant added information.

It shouldn't be "As a child Neil Armstrong always dreamed about..." burying the next most important detail 2/3 through the article. The importance/relevance/interest should start high, end low. Inverted pyramid.

Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by SoftTalker on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @01:24PM (#41711425)
That's the "inverted pyramid" organization that is (or was) taught in journalism. The way it was explained to me is: imagine the reader stops at the headline. Or after reading the first sentence. Or after the first paragraph, etc. In any case, they should have read the most important facts of the story up that point.
Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by bregma on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @01:33PM (#41711545)
Holy cow, don't look for recipes on the web. If you're luck any ingredients and instructions are only 2/3 through. More often 23 pages through.
Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by cole-k on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @02:01PM (#41711906)
Your comment and my response exist in so many places on the internet, but I wanted to point out that most of the web-based recipes I use have a convenient "jump to recipe" button. I won't attempt to explain what SEO/copyright/whatever reasons there are for the excess prose at the beginning, though.

What bothers me more about these sites is how heavyweight they can feel even with ads stripped. I wonder if they all use a similar, bloated JS widget that my phone cannot run smoothly.

Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by pinkmuffinere on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @01:40PM (#41711635)
I’ve been using this app “just the recipe” to avoid this problem. It’s not perfect, but saves me 90% of the time. I think I found it on hn originally.

I have no connection to the app, aside from being a happy user

Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by encom on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @02:20PM (#41712133)
Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by roca on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @12:50PM (#41710950)
I have a theory that a lot of journalists really wanted to be novelists. When they get a chance to write a long-form article they can't resist the urge to flex their stylistic muscles; "look at me, I'm a Serious Writer".
Re:Is the World Really Running Out of Sand? by colechristensen on Tuesday October 01, 2024 @06:29PM (#41714959)
I was talking to a journalist who worked for a major venue and the metric she cared about was number of seconds a user stayed on an article. She didn't say "this is the most important..." she just talked about it for 20 minutes and the different results from different demographics and link sources so it was quite obvious.

So that's what journalists are measured by these days apparently, how long a piece can keep the attention of a user.

Ironically she worked for what I would consider one of the best players in terms of not writing attention grabbing BS. (I won't mention which here)