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Re:Craig Venter's bugs might save the world by drharris on Wednesday May 30, 2012 @01:00PM (#4043646)
The writing here is atrocious. I bogged down in the 3rd paragraph and decided not to continue.

Edit: Seriously, count the frequency of sentences that begin with "He", "But", "And". Sometimes parallel structure is not the way to go.

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Re:Craig Venter's bugs might save the world by leoh on Wednesday May 30, 2012 @01:29PM (#4043770)
I agree with you. I'm busy at the moment, by I think I'll come back later to see if it gets better. The editor may have had Hylton write a catchy, but inauthentic hook to draw readership.
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