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Re:Show HN: My first web app - Resumonk - A beautifully simp... by dotmartyr on Sunday May 06, 2012 @03:18AM (#3934404)
Sentence on your Go PRO! page:

"Check out the PRO version, we are sure that you'll love it."

The fact that you don't contract "we are" and then later in the clause contract you will to "you'll" sounds weird.

Also, you may just want to rewrite that whole bit. It comes out like a ShamWoW ad or something..

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