5th paragraph to the 9th are Cloudflare's "we buggered up" before they get to the power segment. They then continue with the "this is our fault for not being fully HA" after the power bit.
Each to their own, I'm going to read it as a regular old post mortem on this one.
> Due to circumstances beyond our control the DC lost all power. We are still working with our vendors to investigate the cause. While such a failure should not have been possible, our systems are supposed to tolerate a complete loss of a DC.
The ordering that they list the mistakes would be a fair point to make though, in my opinion. They hinted at a mistake they made in their summary, but don't actually tell us point blank what it was until they tell us all the mistakes that their vendor made. I'd argue that was either done to make us feel some empathy for Cloudflare as being victims of the vendor's mistakes, misleading us somewhat. Or it was done that way because it was genuinely embarrassing for the author to write and subconsciously they want us to feel some empathy for them anyway. Or some combination of the two. Either way, I'll grant that I would have preferred to hear what went wrong internally before hearing what went wrong externally.
Here's what happened, here's what went wrong, here's what we did wrong, here's our plans to avoid it happening again
Seems like a standard post mortem tbh