Re:Rivian R1T is the first EV to win the longest off-road co...
by concordDance on Monday October 23, 2023 @05:10AM
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Can you try and cut down on the emotive language like "obsessed", "screeching", etc?
It heightens emotions and lowers the tone of discussion from curious to conflict driven.
Ideally use wording that you think the people you are talking about would agree fairly represents their views. (E.g. for your first sentence, do you think half of HN commentators would agree that they are "obsessed with trying to "gotcha" electric cars, any form of power generation other than nuclear,"?)
It heightens emotions and lowers the tone of discussion from curious to conflict driven.
Ideally use wording that you think the people you are talking about would agree fairly represents their views. (E.g. for your first sentence, do you think half of HN commentators would agree that they are "obsessed with trying to "gotcha" electric cars, any form of power generation other than nuclear,"?)