Re:Margaret Atwood Reviews a Margaret Atwood Story by AI
by mariusor on Monday October 16, 2023 @07:43AM
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I'm not sure if you're trying to say that this output is better, but in my opinion it is very much not.
I don't think that someone that wrote "you fit into me", would use the abundance of qualificatives that this text has. Furthermore there's nothing of Atwood's style that I can detect in it. The only interesting bit for me is the inverted assumption that the voice that speaks to us is male, but I feel like even that's too lame of a device for something a veteran author would do.
I don't think that someone that wrote "you fit into me", would use the abundance of qualificatives that this text has. Furthermore there's nothing of Atwood's style that I can detect in it. The only interesting bit for me is the inverted assumption that the voice that speaks to us is male, but I feel like even that's too lame of a device for something a veteran author would do.
> you fit into me
> like a hook into an eye
> a fish hook
> an open eye