* [email protected] -> hostmaster.example.com
* NS records are usually hostnames (not sure if IPs are even valid)
* Ditto for MX records ; also add a period to the end, otherwise example.net will get appended
* Also appending with the www record
See also:
You can do delegated zones by specifying NS records for a subdomain within the parent zone. If you’re talking about NS for a second level domain (“example” in example.com) you would want glue records which are essentially a “lookaside” to prevent circular dependencies. Glue records are really just A records with clout, returned with the IP of your name server. This glue is maintained by the higher level authoritative zone. So you query for example.org and the nameserver for .org returns ns1.example.org as the name server for your zone, as well as the IP address for that server.
This is why you could run a DNS server at ns1.example.org as your authoritative DNS.
Besides what was mentioned by others, there are two more mistakes in the SOA and one in each NS.
I figured there was since (e.g.) the numbers looked 'off' (regular TTL vs. negative TTL), but couldn't be arsed to look up the exact SOA format.