It is better now, but amusingly - "The other guy is not as well as you, but better with bowling.", in this case it should be "The other guy is not as good as you".

Great article, though.

Ups - thanks, fixed that too. I was definitely not focused enough. The whole feedback on this post is just overwhelming.

Cheers for taking the time to respond to feedback and learn.

Also, props on how strong and well written the English is in general!

And, most importantly, loved the article. :)

(I thought this whole thread was a good example of how to actually do good feedback. )

Thank you for the kind words. It is actually very difficult to estimate if the article is well written or not if you are not using you mother tongue (at least this is how I feel about it). So I consider your comment very motivating!

I think the less than perfect grammar makes the piece flow better, and sound more authentic Zen