> Remember that I am not here trying to argue for the truth of the AC; I'm arguing against the author's argument.
Yep, I get that.
> The author's argument, as I read it, relies on an intuition that "choosing" an element that is not-finitely-describable is problematic.
Not quite. Choosing an element from a set where all of the members are not-finitely-describable is problematic.
> However, the mathematical meaning of "choosing", in the context of the AC, is a statement about the mathematical existence of a certain function.
Yep, I get that.
> To respond to the author's intuition requires only showing that not-finitely-describable domains are not a "problem" for the existence of functions.
No, you would have to show that defining a function on this particular set is not a problem. Note that this is not the same thing as defining a function on elements of this set. That is obviously not a problem. But defining a (non-trivial) function on the set itself is.
It doesn't have anything to do with AoC per se, it has to do (I claim) with people's intuitions about AoC. Specifically, an infinite set of arbitrary subsets of the set of indescribable reals is something for which a reasonable person might be a tad suspicious about postulating the existence of a choice function.