Criticism taken. I was thinking more along the lines of what umjames is saying, but that's besides the point. I want to improve my writing as much as any other skill, so this kind of feedback is much appreciated.

The reason I tacked the whole Questions section on was to:

1) Stimulate the feelings deep down inside those who want to start a startup, but for one reason or another, aren't.

2) Ask the question, how can we compensate people for what they actually contribute in a way that scales better?

Any ideas?