Re:“How Americans edit sex out of my writing”
by scandox on Thursday October 06, 2022 @02:40PM
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Well he explains both what he meant by "marriage blackout nights" and he also says he knew it was an awkward translation that needed editing. So I submit that you may not have read this carefully enough.
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Re:“How Americans edit sex out of my writing”
by treis on Thursday October 06, 2022 @03:39PM
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I do not dispute that. But with a clickbait headline and a long meandering path to the point I don't feel bad about skimming.
Re:“How Americans edit sex out of my writing”
by ajkjk on Thursday October 06, 2022 @03:51PM
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I think if you're skimming longform and then criticizing it you'd be better off just not reading it at all.
Re:“How Americans edit sex out of my writing”
by ajkjk on Friday October 07, 2022 @02:46AM
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edit: okay that was a bit harsher than it needed to be, for internet points. Uh, just maybe don't criticize it without a closer read.
Re:“How Americans edit sex out of my writing”
by klyrs on Thursday October 06, 2022 @03:55PM
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The irony of this is delicious. You presume that the author had a "point" aside from the story that you mistook for a "long meandering path." One might wonder why an author would even care about reaching such an audience. Irony being that the author talked about exactly that cultural divide, but I'm guessing you missed that too.