Re:Poor writing, not specialized concepts, drives difficulty...
by Joker_vD on Monday September 19, 2022 @03:56AM
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The (personally) funny thing about the 2nd amendment is that since I am not a native English speaker, its syntax looks broken to me. Without "since" or "because" at the beginning it reads either as a non sequitur or as a "driving by the gas station, my hat flew off" kind of sentence: the subject suddenly changes midway through and (in my native language) it's a hallmark of non-literate speech which one would really, really like to not have in an important legal document.
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Re:Poor writing, not specialized concepts, drives difficulty...
by comex on Monday September 19, 2022 @04:32AM
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For the record, the extra commas after “Militia” and “Arms” would be considered incorrect by modern standards, though the sentence would otherwise be fine (aside from capitalization).