Re:Including “And. And. And. And. And.” in a Google doc caus...
by _rf on Friday May 06, 2022 @07:38AM
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I know you didn't write that poem, but I'm 99% certain the apostrophes in "I thought about my body. It's past. It's present." have no business being there :)
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Re:Including “And. And. And. And. And.” in a Google doc caus...
by burkaman on Friday May 06, 2022 @10:13AM
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Might be intentional, simultaneously talking about the past and present of a body and also literally that it is past. It is present. It would not be weird to have that kind of wordplay in a poem.
But also this was from an early draft so it could be a mistake.
Re:Including “And. And. And. And. And.” in a Google doc caus...
by fluoridation on Friday May 06, 2022 @09:41AM
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Seems like it could go either way.