Re:Virtualmin (a YC company) has a new website, feedback wanted
by vikram on Wednesday June 27, 2007 @11:32AM
(#31140)
I'm sure you are already doing this. But
"The four best ways to manage your server
Virtualmin offers four methods for managing your server: Web, mobile device, command line, and remote API. Virtualmin is always available, no matter where you are or how you want to work."
can be...
Virtualmin is always available, no matter where you are. You can conveniently manage your servers through Web, mobile, command line and remote API.
I'd delete the entire paragraph following Try a live demo. Just replace it with a link saying live demo.
With the watch a video paragraph can't you put the picture of the video with a link and a play button on it here?
The little I know about writing I learned from "On writing well" - Zinsser. His chapter on simplicity is worth the price of the entire book.
Virtualmin offers four methods for managing your server: Web, mobile device, command line, and remote API. Virtualmin is always available, no matter where you are or how you want to work."
can be...
Virtualmin is always available, no matter where you are. You can conveniently manage your servers through Web, mobile, command line and remote API.
I'd delete the entire paragraph following Try a live demo. Just replace it with a link saying live demo.
With the watch a video paragraph can't you put the picture of the video with a link and a play button on it here?
The little I know about writing I learned from "On writing well" - Zinsser. His chapter on simplicity is worth the price of the entire book.